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【高考英语】2018-2019学年最新英语高考二轮(浙江专用)课件:第1部分专题5第1讲类型2建议信_图文

类型 2| 建议信 栏目 导航 文体分析 写作案例 1.写作目的 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。 2.写作方法 (1)首段: a.简介自己,不要啰嗦; b.说明目的,注意语气。 (2)主体: a.提出具体建议; b.首先肯定优点,再写需改进内容,否则变成投诉信; c.经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提升你和我,否则容易跑题写成议 论文,因为内容与议论文相似。 (3)尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,盼望回复。 假如你叫李华,你的英国朋友 Andrew 下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信 请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在,请你用英语回一封信,按以下 各点答复: 1.建议骑自行车上学; 2.自行车是学生常用的交通工具; 3.骑自行车的一些好处; 4.骑自行车需注意的问题。 注意:词数 80 左右。 [习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文 Dear Andrew, As for the question about the transportation to and from school,I'd like to recommend that you ride ① bicycle.Here are some reasons. ② (骑自行车上、下学在学生中是很常见的。)As is wellknown,buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot.And parking a bicycle is easy in our school.Bicycleriding is also a way to do ③exercises and protect the environment.What you should do ④careful is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you're off it.⑤By this way,you'll feel it simple and ⑥relax to ride a bicycle while you're here. Hopefully,these tips could be helpful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 1.避免搭配错误 ④处 careful 改为 carefully ⑤处 By 改为 In 2.杜绝语法错误 ①处添加冠词 a ③处 exercises 改为 exercise ⑥处 relax 改为 relaxing 3.要点一定不要遗漏 补上②处要点:Riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students. [自我提升]——向极优作文迈进 Dear Andrew, As for the question about the transportation to and from school, I'd like to recommend that you ride a bicycle.Here are some reasons. Firstly,①riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students, for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot.Next,parking a bicycle is easy and ② (便利的)in our school.③ (事实上),bicycle?riding is also a ④ (实用的)way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you're off it.In this way, you'll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you're here. Hopefully,these tips could be helpful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 1.高级词汇 ②convenient ③Actually/As a matter of fact ④practical 2.高级句型 用 it is common practice to do...改写句①加黑部 分: it is common practice for the students to ride a bike to and from school

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